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Look Into Your Characters' Brains

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Look Into Your Characters’ Brains

At a former job, my boss asked each of us to take a test, called Emergenetics, which, in simple terms, is a tool to help a person not only better understand his or her own thinking patterns and behaviors, but also how those patterns and behaviors mesh with others’ patterns and behaviors.

In short, it was a “team-building activity.” Yes, the dreaded team activity where employees moan and groan and grudgingly agree to do it because the boss said so. In my team of ten employees, we each took the Emergenetics test. Basically, we answered a slew of questions and were told we’d all reconvene in a month to review the results together.

A month later, the results came in. The meeting was mandatory, so we dutifully trudged into the meeting room, wondering what hocus-pocus we were going to have to endure.

We were each handed an individualized pie chart that represented our brains. Each brain chart was divided into four areas: analytical, structural, conceptual, and social. And we were told how each chart, based on the test results, reflected how we currently think.

I looked at my chart, or uh, I mean brain. I’m 34% analytical (I am? Wait, let me evaluate that for a moment…), 23% structural (Hmm, these test procedures are rather interesting.), 24% conceptual (Wow, look at the colors on this chart!) and 19% social (Hey, anybody want to grab a latte after this?).

We were asked to share our charts with our co-workers sitting at the table—after all, this was a way to get to know how each other thinks, a means to better understand “where we’re coming from” essentially. My best buddy was almost 40% structural and we laughed out loud, recalling the times he insisted I needed to follow guidelines! A theatre major in the group was an amazing 60% conceptual—well of course! This guy loved the world of imagination.

And so we began to understand how each of us thinks, enabling us to better understand each other and to better work together.

As writers, we can also use these same thinking attributes to help develop and build our characters. Remember, this is a tool only, not the sole means to character development. But I’ve found it’s helped me further develop my characters by thinking about how they might think and behave, per the Emergenetics model.

The following provides more in-depth definitions of each of the Emergenetics four thinking attributes. Emergenetics, by the way, identified these attributes by factor-analyzing data from thousands of individuals (I’ll provide their website at the end of this article).

Thinking Attributes

Analytical: This attribute includes a preference for reasoning, analysis, financial calculation, higher mathematics, and problem solving. People who have a strong analytical bent might enjoy technology, mental analysis, and theoretical concepts. Words they might use to describe themselves include factual, rational, clear thinker, critical thinker, and objective.

Structural: This attribute tends to be cautious of new or untried ideas. People with strong structural thought processes often like guidelines, methodical progress, organization, and planned agendas. They describe themselves as orderly, dependable, implementers, practical, certain, and predictable.

Social. This attribute reflects a need to get along with people, reliance on others’ opinions, sensitivity to others, and visceral intuition. Those ranking high in this social style describe themselves as empathic, sympathetic, and intuitive about people. They like learning a new task by having someone show them and often use personal examples in conversation.

Conceptual. This attribute often searches for new ways to solve old problems, gets excited when something is new and different, and enjoys producing ideas more than drawing conclusions. These people have a tendency to be intuitive about concepts and ideas. They jump from one task to another, like metaphoric problem-solving, and take risks. They describe themselves as global, imaginative, unconventional, and aesthetic.

But keep in mind, although we as writers know why our characters think the way they do, other characters don’t. They can’t “see” how another character is thinking. But they do see other characters’ behavior through expressiveness, assertiveness, and flexibility.

Descriptions of these behavioral attributes are below.

Expressiveness. This indicates the amount of social interest people show for others and the world around them. At one end of the spectrum, a person can effusively express affection for others or easily start conversations with strangers while at the other end of the spectrum, a person can seem painfully shy or meticulously shun the limelight.

Assertiveness. This reflects the degree of energy invested in expressing thoughts, feelings, and beliefs. People can range from a driving need to convince others of their point of view to shying away from competitive situations.

Flexibility. This measures a willingness to accommodate to the thoughts and actions of others. Flexible people can often handle stressful situations while maintaining an even temper and may find it easy to be patient with difficult people. At the other end of the spectrum, they may have trouble meeting another person halfway and may abhor change.

Currently, I’m writing a book with a hero who is a “computer guru” and a loner (he has other characteristics, but I’m simplifying for the sake of this article). If I were to analyze his thinking percentages, I’d give him 40% analytical, 25% structural, 10% social, and 25% conceptual. This higher conceptual tendency provides a fun twist in his personality. Typically, he appears rational and logical, but he surprises people, especially the heroine, with his imaginative streak and his intuitive insights.

Regarding his behavioral attributes, this character struggles with expressing his emotions, although he takes the leap from assertiveness to downright aggressiveness when provoked. And he’s been on his own so long, the man is rarely flexible.

To return to my work situation, all of our thinking and behavioral attributes were compiled into one chart so, at a glance, we could get a sense of how we interacted as a group. I’ve made the names up to protect people’s identities, but here’s a glimpse at what the group chart told us (and we all had them tacked on our walls as a gentle reminder that each of our thought processes and behaviors were different, not right or wrong, just different).

Doreen was the most expressive and social in the group, but also the least analytical. She typically got very exuberant over other people’s ideas and we could count on her to get everyone “on the same plate.” She often asked people what they thought or how they felt…she was keenly interested in how others were feeling socially.

Brad abhorred structure, but was extremely conceptual and assertive. We could count on him to speak up with new, imaginative ideas. We could also count on him to be late to most meetings.

Our boss was at the lowest end of expressiveness, but high on conceptual and structural. This woman was always unnervingly calm, kept everyone on track, and loved to brainstorm new ideas.

Get the picture? You can use these guidelines to not only flesh out individual characters, but also how all the characters interact with each other in a given situation.

But, as I mentioned previously, as with any character-development tool, keep in mind that these are guidelines only. People are unique, flexible, and adjust and change according to whatever environments they’re in. Also, people’s thinking and behavior adjusts and changes in response to dramatic episodes, such as significant life events, alcohol, etc.

Have fun playing with these tools as you create and fine-tune your characters, and click the link to learn more about Emergenetics.

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